Tuesday, 17 July 2007
Tadaa!!
O yes! Completed my new poem as promised. The idea for this poem is due to what my new Chinese Lit teacher said during the lesson ytd. She said a unique characteristic about new poems is that they must rhyme. Actually im also quite tired about including to much love stuffs in my poems. So now i composed something that rhymes and with a new type of content.

The name of my poem is 《问》, which means 'Ask'. Sometimes we are too busy in our own work that we often neglect certain things that's around us. That's very sad. Therefore, i hope this poem can create some consensus for those who read this poem and hopefully give some comments so i can improve further. ^.^

《问》
风铃在风中清唱,
夏天午后总不觉漫长。
花猫在客厅玩耍,
这种想法是否像个傻瓜?

时代使人脚步匆忙,
可惜忽略路边小花。
是否适时暂停一下,
听听周遭的真心话?

秋千孤独摇晃,
童真回忆早成过往。
儿时纸上随意画,
是不是遥不可及的奢望?

冰绿茶散发芬芳,
暧暧柔光挥洒地上。
从前怎没如此感触,
是否知觉早已麻木?

流星划过我面前,
悄悄降落在人间。
我短暂的十七岁,
是否应该留给谁?




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